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Sample E-mail - visit to shopping mall


You have recently visited a shopping mall which was exciting for you. Write an email to your friends about it.

Write an e-mail to your friend about it

In your email, you should:

• Say why you were excited about the mall.

• What did u purchase

• Invite your friend to visit the mall.

Your email should be between 150 and 200 words long

Dear Aki,

I was happy like anything to see you in the inbox. Have you come back? How was your journey? I’m thinking, how’ll it be like to fly that long![A1]

There’s news for you! They’ve opened a new shopping mall in our town. Just a jump away[A2] from Mary’s house. Mom and I went there with Mary[A3]. No words, Aki! I felt I was in a wonderland! All our favourite rides are there. I was tickled pink when I get in to pirate ship. As you know I love watching 4D movies. But this was the first time I watched a 9D movie. I screamed twice inside the hall. I enjoyed every bit of time there.

You know mom well. She is fond of buying crockery items. I bought a truck full of vessels[A4]. But I was behind room decoration. My buddy, I know what you’re thinking!Don’t worry; I bought your favorite wall decoration pack.[A5]

Well, next Sunday is holiday. You just come here. I want to go there with you and Alan. It would add icing on the cake.[A6] Rides and friendship! Alan will really enjoy every rides there. Net riding will be easy for our little spider man.[A7]

Oh. I forgot! Zayya has called me for a lunch. I must rush to her house! I can’t miss her dishes. Lip-smacking![A8] Say my ‘hi’ to everyone. Take care.

With love,

Pratap.

ANALYSIS

Introduction

  • Comment [A1]: Personalised remark
  • Body Paragraph 1

  • Comment [A2]: informal expression
  • Comment [A3]: personalisation
  • Body Paragraph 2

  • Comment [A4]: informal expression
  • Comment [A5]: personalisation
  • Body Paragraph 3

  • Comment [A6]: Idiom
  • Comment [A7]: informal expression
  • Conclusion

  • Comment [A8]: descriptive adjective
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