Last week, your class held an ‘international food fest’ which was open to all.
Write an email to a friend, telling him/her about it.
In your email, you should:
• explain how you helped to arrange the programme
• describe what happened during the event
• say why it was so successful.
Introduction
Dear Basin,
How long since we texted! I was insane with work. As you call, a real busy beaver![A1] By the way, Razaan told me you’re planning to go abroad next year, really?
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I’ve a real thing to tell you.[A2] I’ve done something! Last week there was a food fest in our school. In fact, it was the work of our Green Club. They made me the convener of the planning team. I set out to islands, surfed on net and at last made a plan. I showed it first to Maaisha and she said it’s wonderful.[A3]
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Your best friend[A4] was in charge of the reception. She is an architect! She used every nook and corner of the compound. You know it’s season. So we made continental and Japanese food. Any guess? People were flowing like anything. But you know, there is a funny thing. The tourists took only our food. But our people were like bees around the continental! Anyway, Shameem
Ma’am was excited.[A5] It was a grand success. See the photos!
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We had a meeting after the function. I don’t know why we always fall upon number three. They say, there are three reasons for our success! Shazeen felt my plan as the best, but then Libi told about the chef and the season. Tourists came in crowd. One thing is sure. Zayyan is a wonderful cook. He made our local food. Wow! Lip smacking![A6] Even tourists forgot manners and licked fingers.[A7]
Conclusion
Basin, I must dash now[A8]. It’s time I started for my tuition. Aswathy miss would be waiting. See you.
Love,
Shaffan,
ANALYSIS
Introduction
Comment [A1]: Idiom
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Comment [A2]: Transition
Comment [A3]: Personalised Reference
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Comment [A4]: Personalisation
Comment [A5]: Personalised Reference
Body Paragraph 3
Comment [A6]: Idiomatic/informal expression
Comment [A7]: Idiomatic/informal expression
Conclusion
Comment [A8]: Idiom