Introduction
Excellence is a matter of power as well as knowledge[A1]. Emotional strength and socialising skills are important. Therefore,[A2] in my opinion,[A3] the idea of the government to include compulsory team-Sport in curriculum is a great step.[A4]
Body paragraph-1: Explains the supporting point in the opinion statement- idea is excellent ways to foster team behavior
Team-sports help to build socialising skills which are most essential in our time.[A5] Our present world is a large complex of organisations where everything is done, not by isolated individuals, but by humans in combination. In other words, nothing is possible without team skills which are primary socialising skills these days. Team-sports are excellent ways to foster this team behavior. Thus, they contribute to train children for their successful lives.
Body paragraph-2
A million dollar question in our modern society is how to learn to manage failures. It perfectly stands to reason that there is nothing better than team-sports at this. We play as teams, learn how to win, but more importantly learn how to take failure.
Body paragraph-3 :Treats the alternative opinion
It is true that competitive sports involve the risk of losers getting side-lined or broken.[A6] But, this can be prevented by sensible policies and motivating steps.[A7]
Conclusion
In the nut shell,[A8] the plan of Team-Sport in school curriculum serves to form students’ personality to suit the requirements of modern life and so we should accept it. We must also discuss the details of the plan, in order to make it maximally flexible and inclusive
